Hi! Thank you for applying to Revision Three. Your application looks good, but we would like to request for some clarifications.

Specifically, we would like to know more about Isuzu's flaws and weaknesses. While we feel you've got a good handle on the positive side of her personality, we'd like to know what's negative about her; more specifically, you mention overcoming her shortcomings, but never properly address those shortcomings. We'd like to know what you view as Isuzu's shortcomings, to ensure you have a proper feel for the character.

Please submit your revision within the week. We will evaluate the revision as soon as possible.