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revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:33 pm
revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:33 pm
AU Applications
PLAYER;
Name: Your name, of course.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:usernamehere
Contact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this
OFFLINE;
Offline Name: The is the name your character uses when not in The World R:3. Western order please.
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Location: Where does your character live offline? If you wish to stick with the default (San Diego, California), then you may leave this section blank.
Original History: A link or description of the character's original history. It does not need to be extremely detailed unless you are applying for a canon OC. In this case, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
AU History: Please describe how you have modified this character's original history to fit the world of Revision Three. Include all relations the character has. If you're not sure what your character should know in regards to .hack, there is an answer for that in the FAQ.
Appearance: You may choose between letting your character keep their original appearance or give them a plainer appearance. In the former case, a picture of the character is sufficient, but in the latter case you should make a basic description of their appearance.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum. If there are modifications to the character's personality as a result of being AU'd, make note of it here and explain it to the best of your ability.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
ONLINE INFORMATION;
Note that you are only allowed to have one PC right now. If you wish to give your character more PCs, you must ask a mod.
PC Name: The name of your character's player character.
Race: You may pick between Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human in OU."
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason should be something your character would give if they were asked why they picked that class.
Appearance: This does not have to be very detailed. Make note of facial characteristics, and the general style of clothing. You may also provide pictures.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
First Person: This is the format used in the Network community. Actions are in brackets while spoken word or text is not. Minimum length is eight sentences.
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:
usernamehereContact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this
OFFLINE;
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Location: Where does your character live offline? If you wish to stick with the default (San Diego, California), then you may leave this section blank.
Original History: A link or description of the character's original history. It does not need to be extremely detailed unless you are applying for a canon OC. In this case, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
AU History: Please describe how you have modified this character's original history to fit the world of Revision Three. Include all relations the character has. If you're not sure what your character should know in regards to .hack, there is an answer for that in the FAQ.
Appearance: You may choose between letting your character keep their original appearance or give them a plainer appearance. In the former case, a picture of the character is sufficient, but in the latter case you should make a basic description of their appearance.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum. If there are modifications to the character's personality as a result of being AU'd, make note of it here and explain it to the best of your ability.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
ONLINE INFORMATION;
Note that you are only allowed to have one PC right now. If you wish to give your character more PCs, you must ask a mod.
Race: You may pick between Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human in OU."
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason should be something your character would give if they were asked why they picked that class.
Appearance: This does not have to be very detailed. Make note of facial characteristics, and the general style of clothing. You may also provide pictures.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
[ Canon AU || Asuna Yuuki || Sword Art Online || reserve ]
Age: 32
Personal Journal:
Contact Info: texside @ Plurk
Other Characters: None!
OFFLINE;
Age: 15 at the start of the arc, 17 at the end; I am going to say she is right in the middle at 16 at R3.
Canon: Sword Art Online; I guess specifically the Aincrad arc, but this is an AU. It's where my icons are from?
Location: I'm going to bend canon and say Asuna's family relocated to San Diego, California just because that seems easier. Her dad works with a large electronics firm that sent him out there, so she came along, as did the rest of her family.
Original History: The SAO wiki has words.
AU History: Here, Asuna's father is not a CEO. He is a high-ranking member of a Japanese electronics firm which has just opened a new plant and research and development lab in San Diego, California. The elder Yuuki is the man who was put in charge of this plant and laboratory; he moved to the United States with a work visa, and brought his family with him.
For her entire life, Asuna has had high expectations placed on her. She is the daughter of two very talented business people and engineers; she went to some of the best schools, and has been expected to apply herself well. She did just that, too. She has never let her parents down; conversely, she's had little life or interests that she can call her own. Her parents directed her life, with the best of intentions.
When she got to San Diego, she had to branch out some. She had to make new friends in school, for one thing, and started to make a few. More than that, though, Asuna started playing The World -- as a way to have fun, to pass some time, and set a few of her own goals. It's a casual hobby, but it's hers.
Appearance: Asuna looks like she does in the anime's first arc.
Personality: Asuna is a very determined young woman. In canon, she is essentially a normal girl who ended up in the middle of a kill-or-be-killed virtual reality game that wasn't so virtual. She managed, after a period of initial freaking out, to decide that she wanted to survive and apply herself to this utterly. This demonstrates this essential core of who Asuna is: she has an inner resolve and hardness that is hard to crack, that can self-motivate her, and can unfortunately make her rather stubborn.
This isn't gone at Revision 3. She's just playing the game for fun, here; she is also not trapped in it. However, that doesn't make her something different. She has that inner reserve of strength; life has never made her tap into it. It will, eventually. She may crumple at first, but she will inevitably find her way forward and keep moving.
She also is stubborn about the game. She wants to do well and prove herself; this is a place where she can apply herself as she sees fit. This means, on the one hand, she's pretty good at it. On the other, she can take it a little too seriously.
However, this mono-focused nature doesn't make Asuna a vicious or cruel person. She might pester someone to do better at their class -- but she also is a newbie, knows what it's like, and tries to help people. At heart, she is a kind and considerate person, who really wants the best for everyone. She tries to be helpful, but the combination of her stubbornness and pride mean that Asuna can be bossy or even unreasonable.
Most of the time, though, Asuna is a good person to just hang out with. She is cheerful and chatty; she doesn't like to keep herself apart from her allies and she needs time to relax sometimes. She might be hard working, but she likes to cook a good meal, chat with someone, and the like. She may hide this sometimes, to keep up her determined tough girl act.
Asuna is quite proud of herself. That determination and self-certainty gives her an ego; she knows she is good at what she does and she knows that. She is one of the best in her world. She lets this go to her head. She can talk down to people sometimes and she can get even more stubborn when she thinks someone isn't listening to her clearly superior knowledge, then overreact, by challenging them and getting aggressive. Asuna can also have her pride insulted, which makes her prickly.
She is a fairly aggressive person. Sometimes, this is good; it's how she rose to the top, plays into her determination, and is how she protects people. However, she can pick fights when she feels affronted. It also means her emotions can get the best of her. She will act hotheaded or snappy when she gets offended. She might even physically lash out, if she gets really angry.
Basically, for all that Asuna acts like the cool, calm, and confident commander, she is a total hothead. She thinks with her heart; it drives why she tries to help and protect people, it drives how she gets offended and angry, and it makes her vulnerable to getting hurt.
Other:Nothing!
ONLINE;
Race: Human
Class: Adept Rogue (1 point for Blade Brandier, 3 point for Harvest Cleric)
Appearance: Asuna's in-game avatar is a human that looks a lot like her, with two big changes. First, her hair color and eye color are changed to blue. Second, if humans in The World can set it that way, she has pointed ears. I am admittedly not certain if this is possible. If not, she has normal, non-pointed ears but is still painfully blue.
Other: Basically, Asuna did a build that is equal parts fast melee combat using rapiers and healing/support magic via the Harvest Cleric. She is, in short, Battle Healer.
SAMPLES;
Good afternoon, everyone! I hope you are well. The glitches appear to be getting worse. Have any of you encountered people who have said strange things?
What comes to mind immediately are individuals claiming they could not choose their classes or that they came from other worlds. I was initially convinced this was a troll. However...
There are enough, and enough with sincerity, that I am beginning to wonder if The World is hosting some sort of event.
Third Person: A fishing contest that Asuna participated in at Dragon Haven. If you'd prefer I write one specifically for R3, I'll gladly do so!
Accepted
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