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revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:33 pm
revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:33 pm
AU Applications
PLAYER;
Name: Your name, of course.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:usernamehere
Contact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this
OFFLINE;
Offline Name: The is the name your character uses when not in The World R:3. Western order please.
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Location: Where does your character live offline? If you wish to stick with the default (San Diego, California), then you may leave this section blank.
Original History: A link or description of the character's original history. It does not need to be extremely detailed unless you are applying for a canon OC. In this case, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
AU History: Please describe how you have modified this character's original history to fit the world of Revision Three. Include all relations the character has. If you're not sure what your character should know in regards to .hack, there is an answer for that in the FAQ.
Appearance: You may choose between letting your character keep their original appearance or give them a plainer appearance. In the former case, a picture of the character is sufficient, but in the latter case you should make a basic description of their appearance.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum. If there are modifications to the character's personality as a result of being AU'd, make note of it here and explain it to the best of your ability.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
ONLINE INFORMATION;
Note that you are only allowed to have one PC right now. If you wish to give your character more PCs, you must ask a mod.
PC Name: The name of your character's player character.
Race: You may pick between Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human in OU."
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason should be something your character would give if they were asked why they picked that class.
Appearance: This does not have to be very detailed. Make note of facial characteristics, and the general style of clothing. You may also provide pictures.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
First Person: This is the format used in the Network community. Actions are in brackets while spoken word or text is not. Minimum length is eight sentences.
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:
usernamehereContact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this
OFFLINE;
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Location: Where does your character live offline? If you wish to stick with the default (San Diego, California), then you may leave this section blank.
Original History: A link or description of the character's original history. It does not need to be extremely detailed unless you are applying for a canon OC. In this case, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
AU History: Please describe how you have modified this character's original history to fit the world of Revision Three. Include all relations the character has. If you're not sure what your character should know in regards to .hack, there is an answer for that in the FAQ.
Appearance: You may choose between letting your character keep their original appearance or give them a plainer appearance. In the former case, a picture of the character is sufficient, but in the latter case you should make a basic description of their appearance.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum. If there are modifications to the character's personality as a result of being AU'd, make note of it here and explain it to the best of your ability.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
ONLINE INFORMATION;
Note that you are only allowed to have one PC right now. If you wish to give your character more PCs, you must ask a mod.
Race: You may pick between Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human in OU."
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason should be something your character would give if they were asked why they picked that class.
Appearance: This does not have to be very detailed. Make note of facial characteristics, and the general style of clothing. You may also provide pictures.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
Part 2
Race: Ya Tribe Beast
Class: Tribal Grappler
Appearance: A tall, hulking individual with tiger-like features, namely the tail, ears and eyes, and fingers ending in claws. Gear equipped upon him is skinned in the 'bancho' style, from the jacket slung over his shoulders and loose pants to the hand-wraps to guard his knuckles while punching. A band is tied around his head, a stripe of color across his forehead, a contrast to the countless stripe-like tattoos that adorn his arms and down his body, connecting with the stripes on his tail. An extremely unapproachable-looking creature.
Other: Down the line, as Kanji finds cutesy little decorative items in his adventures, Zaiten will start wearing small ducky charms or even tuck a little teddy bear in his pocket whether it gives him stat boosts or not.
SAMPLES;
Third Person:
Why the hell hadn't he left Mac Anu sooner!? The fields were like a whole new world to him, yet in some respects they were similar to his life offline. Well, sans monsters. Not far outside of town, the grappler met his first opponent. It was small and actually kinda cute, but it still pawed the ground and looked to him for a fight before throwing its weight into a charge.
A fight, huh? Got it! He gestured it closer before his hands tightened into fists. He'll get the basics down eventually. This freaking class was made for him. Good ol' brawler.
He stepped left into the monster's path and put his upper body into the punch, a kiai sharp in his throat. Against his knuckles he felt the impact, then the shock of all the build up energy from that charge. Planting his feet, he pushed against it, and sent his punch on the follow-through. Hurling the monster airborne, and jumped after it. His fists were a blur as he activated a Rapid Attack of kicks and punches, knuckles striking soft fur and skin beneath, striking a sturdy head as the grappler knocked it silly. Damn... if only he could pull off this sort of thing in real life! He only had to practice, right?
The monster never stood a chance, but he would learn later that it was newbie fodder to begin with. It burst into data before it even hit the dirt after a final solid kick to the face, and Zaiten landed neatly on his feet, pounding both fists together. His heart was pounding; this was pretty damn exciting! No wonder so many people played this game!
...Oh, whoops, he had to grab the loot before someone else did. Money meant food, fist weapons and cool upgrades! Right? As he stooped and gathered the spoils, he had to wonder how much more fun it'd be with other people. He paused, frowning. Damn it, he'd only been playing ten minutes and he was thinking about the Investigation Team again.
He had to stop doing that. The team was done. It was over, and there was nothing he could do about it.
But he could miss them just a little, right?
Accepted
After you have done this, post to the Taken Characters page and check out the Useful Tools page for some charts you may find useful to have for your character during their stay at Revision Three. Please create an IC inbox for your character as well! Make sure to read over the Rules and FAQ if you haven't already, and then introduce yourself at
A note: please be aware that you were switching tenses in your history and personality section. As it did not appear in your samples, we did not ask for revisions, but please be aware of this.
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