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revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:34 pm
revisionmods) wrote2014-01-26 07:34 pm
Jamjar Applications
PLAYER;
Name: Your name, of course.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:usernamehere
Contact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this.
CHARACTER;
Name: Western order please.
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Canon Point: This doesn't need to be extremely specific, like page and panel. Just mentioning what events happened right before/after that point is good enough.
History: A link or description of the character's history. For canon OCs, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
Appearance: You may link a picture of them, but write a few sentences noting their clothing style in The World.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum.
CRAU: If you are planning to app this character after their experience in another game, please fill in this section and note what major experiences they had and how it changed them. If not, you may erase this section.
Race: Upon entering The World, your character will be converted into either a Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Please pick one of the four listed and provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human" but for non-intuitive picks (like changing a human to a beast clan member) you may want to provide a longer reason.
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason does not need to fit your character.
Abilities: What kind of abilities does your character have? Note that all abilities will start sealed off from the character, but can eventually be added to their skillset using the Original Skill System.
Items: You may list up to 5 starting items, but they are locked from the character until they reach level 15.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
First Person: This is the format used in the Network community. Actions are in brackets while spoken word or text is not. Minimum length is eight sentences.
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
Age: Revision Three is 14+, please make sure you're above this age.
Personal Journal:
usernamehereContact Info: AIM, Plurk, Email, put in anything and as much as you want
Other Characters: If you are already playing characters in Revision Three, please name them here. If this is your first character, you can erase this.
CHARACTER;
Age: If it isn't stated, make an educated guess.
Canon: Be as specific as you can.
Canon Point: This doesn't need to be extremely specific, like page and panel. Just mentioning what events happened right before/after that point is good enough.
History: A link or description of the character's history. For canon OCs, please be as detailed as you can, and note where you have supplied headcanon to fill in what's missing.
Appearance: You may link a picture of them, but write a few sentences noting their clothing style in The World.
Personality: We expect at least three paragraphs, or 300 words minimum.
CRAU: If you are planning to app this character after their experience in another game, please fill in this section and note what major experiences they had and how it changed them. If not, you may erase this section.
Race: Upon entering The World, your character will be converted into either a Human or one of the three beast clans: The Ya Tribe, the Lei Tribe or the Tu Tribe. A small description of the races are here. Please pick one of the four listed and provide a little reasoning: it can be as simple as "My character is human" but for non-intuitive picks (like changing a human to a beast clan member) you may want to provide a longer reason.
Class: Please pick one of classes listed on this page. For Adept Rogues, list the other classes you have chosen, beginning with your starting class. Please also provide a reason for the class you picked. The reason does not need to fit your character.
Abilities: What kind of abilities does your character have? Note that all abilities will start sealed off from the character, but can eventually be added to their skillset using the Original Skill System.
Items: You may list up to 5 starting items, but they are locked from the character until they reach level 15.
Other: Is there anything else you would like to note? Put it here.
SAMPLES;
You may link a post or thread from a musebox, a meme thread, or a previous games, but make sure they are long enough for the mods to accurately judge your writing.
Third Person: This is for the Log community, and should be written in third person past tense. Here, there is more room for introspection and description. Please make this a minimum of two paragraphs. You may link a sample from elsewhere, but only if your First Person sample was not linked, and vice versa.
Re: OU || Luna || Virtue's Last Reward || reserve
Luna trusts others very easily and a lot more than she ought to. Within minutes, someone can earn her trust enough that she would gladly put her life their hands without a second thought. Unfortunately, this means that she is very easy to manipulate on top of being very easy to hurt emotionally. If her trust is betrayed, Luna blames the one who wronged her a lot less than she blames herself for being so stupid. Of course, it’s actually fairly easy to earn her trust back again at that point and simply hurt her again. In all likelihood, it would take her quite some time to actually start distrusting someone entirely.
It is literally impossible to drive Luna to actual anger. Because before even reaching that point, she would rather sink to self-deprecation and remove herself entirely from the situation. So despite being a very social creature, if Luna is upset enough, she will seclude herself for a short time - never for very long - and come to terms with the reasons as to why she is so upset. It is not in her nature to burden others with her problems, and she will go out of her way to make sure that her problems stay her own.
In her essence, Luna is a healer and a helper. She actively looks out for the well-being of others, usually over her own well-being as well. It is important to her that people live happy and healthy lives, which is why she loves medicine and healing so much. Also, because of her intelligent nature, Luna gladly researches cures to illnesses that have no cures as well as new and innovative ways to heal and fix the people that are brought to her.
It is also important to note that Luna lives her life by the Laws of Robotics set down by author Isaac Asimov:
A robot may not injure a human being or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm.
A robot must obey the orders given to it by human beings, except where such orders would conflict with the First Law.
A robot must protect its own existence as long as such protection does not conflict with the First or Second Law.
And despite the fact that she is not aware of the 0th law, she does inadvertently follow it as well:
0. A robot may not harm humanity, or, by inaction, allow humanity to come to harm.
So the likelihood of Luna ever going out of her way to hurt someone, actively or passively, is pretty much zero. Labeling her a pacifist would make a lot of sense, seeing as she does not like violence between others either.
Race: Human - It’s funny because she fakes being a human through the entirety of her canon, and now she’s a fake human again, wow.
Class: Harvest Cleric - Luna’s morals refuse to let her actually fight, plus she has a medical license, so it only makes sense for her to be a cleric.
Abilities: Luna’s canon abilities lie entirely within the natural realm. She is very adept at using computers and hacking systems, and she is also a licensed medical professional. Mostly, she is good at retaining vast amounts of knowledge and relaying that information.
Items: Her necklace is the only thing that would be important for Luna to have, I think.
Other: N/A
SAMPLES;
Third Person: As a blast from some magic that Luna could not place burst behind her, she dove for the nearest cover, sliding across the ground in the process. Panting, she peered out from behind her hiding place - it seemed to be a large rock - and tried to pick out whatever had been attacking her.
This was what she got for separating from the group, even by accident. She was trying desperately to contact someone, anyone, but her fingers kept fumbling over the touchscreen and hitting the wrong buttons.
It was in that moment that she noticed she was bleeding. And then the pain kicked in. Pain and blood as felt on a human level were still things that Luna was trying to grow accustomed to, and she doubled over, hissing as she suddenly recognized all of the stinging from the tiny scrapes and bruises all over her body.
She could heal them, easily enough, but at the same time she knew that it would be better for her to grow used to these small pains as much as she could. So instead, she forced herself to ignore the pain and peer out towards her attacker again. The dust was settling now and she could see the shape moving slowly towards her. There was really nothing she could do offensively, but she would be damned if she went down without a fight of some sort...
Accepted
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